Thesis Statement: While Darfur is Dying and Packman may attempt to portray a serious message, the humor tends to outshine the severity of the situation.
Outline:
Intro:
Brief discussion of the two games and thesis statement
Body:
What is Darfur is Dying?
What is Packman?
Breif discussion of the gameplay.
What message are they trying to explain?
Why are these games so funny?
Where did they go wrong or were they intended this way?
Conclusion:
Explanation of why these games are funny and what they are and are not.
Also, warp-up the thesis statement with a claim backed by evidence.
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2 comments:
Your outline is good, it would help a lot if you replayed your games and took specific notes and added that to your outline. Your thesis is good and it seems like you have a strong hold on what your paper will be about.
alex feinstein(yellow)
Where is the line when you say the humor outshines the message in these games? And how can you prove that the humor wasn't just a useful tool to expose the issue.
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